The story was a pretty good take on the good old 'damsel in distress' theme. The character's looked decent as well.
On the flip side, the voice acting was kinda blah. You can always find some voice actors here that would be willing to work for free. The animation also seemed a bit awkward with his movement, but definitely on its way. Another suggestion would be to add a bit of music. There are some stock 'adventure music' that you can always find in the audio portal as well.
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